Baaton Baaton main Yun hi wo baat yaad aayi...
Badal gayi thi Jab raahein wo raat yaad aayi...!!
Majboor Halaat..aur Uski majbooriyan....
Yun hi Barti gayi rishto main dooriyaan..
Choohth gaya sab kuch.. Bar gayi main
pakra saahas, uthaya haunsla-Dekha us humraah ko,
Aur, Uski rahoon se mur gayi main..!
Tanha tha safar, Par rasta mera tha,
Bikhre hue patto ka bana naya aashiyana-sirf mera tha!
Ab na koi ajnabee, na koi paraya
Na koi aahat, na koi chaaya..!!
Apne hi hai raaste, Pehchaan Purani hai..
Khatam hua Dana waha.. To ghar yaad aaya,
Fir se ek baar purana safar yaad aaya..!
Naye Pankho ki hai uraan..Ab yakeen mera hai..
Zamee hi nahi.. aasama mera hai..
Chu liya hai Jindagi ne mujhe, Upar kahin sarmaaya mera hai...
Naye hai kadam , thirak rahi hu main.. Nayi Jindagi ki khusboo se mehek rahi hu main!!
Yaadein hai bas purani... Baaki sab naya hai.. Is nayepan ki jindagi main chehak rahi hu main!
Mitthu!
Naye hai kadam , thirak rahi hu main.. Nayi Jindagi ki khusboo se mehek rahi hu main!!
ReplyDeleteYaadein hai bas purani... Baaki sab naya hai.. Is nayepan ki jindagi main chehak rahi hu main!
Mitthu Ji,
Bahut hee sundar aur bhavanatmak abhivyakti hai is rachana men bhee...lekin problem vahee hai ki...hindi kee itanee achchhee rachana roman men kyon ?doosaree bat apke tempalet aur
font ka colour apas men merge ho rahe hain .inaka colour change kariye.
shubhkamnaon ke sath.
Hemant Kumar
amazing one.......... i like ur writing style.
ReplyDeleteit takes hardly 5min to read a blog.... but it takes hrs to write.....
ReplyDelete1.thot process
2.feelings
3.looking for proper words...
superb... great feelings... so touched.
Calm and quite,
ReplyDeletein lap of Himalaya's,
Never thought,a subtle thought will arise,
powered by Google,a page at remote, will thrive,
Indeed a deep sublime,writing to witness,
with scented God own palce,a lineage to witness.
Great Work, I shall not say,
yet a Genuine writer to evolve.
Eternal Bliss